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The Garden by Urnam-BOT The Garden by Urnam-BOT
EDIT: Four critiques and only one of them actually helps with improving. Saying "this is perfect!" does NOT help. No art is perfect, no matter how it looks. So when critiquing, make sure you ACTUALLY point out at least SOMETHING that will make the picture better. Otherwise I have to click the stupid "unfair" button for being nonconstructive.

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First concept of STEVE. =D STEVE is the ship in #Space-Garden and it's enormous ahhh

This is one of the newest rooms, but a lot of people spend a lot of time in it. xD

I'll do other concepts, probably the Jazz Club next. xD But I'll put characters in it because I don't just want a bunch of empty seats lol.

So, this is the greenhouse, but i call it the garden ahaaa

it's basically a HUGE, INDOOR JUNGLE. Or at least that's how I imagined it. XD

No references were used, I livestreamed this ;A; if i open the internet while livestreaming it deletes almost all of the recording.

Gemberry Concept: [link]

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art (c) me
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This drawing is absolutely beautiful. I love the color choices, the shading, the little moss-tree in the background. It's very well done. The only thing negative that I have to say about it is that there wasn't anything in the close-to-you part of the river that indicated water, you know in the dark part. It looks like just one big color. A few more lines for water, and possibly a little more detail on the ground next to the river. Other than that, those are the only two "flaws", I suppose, that I could find. This drawing is so well done, and I love the sun rays shining on the river. You did a wonderful job with this. This is going in my favorites. <3
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This is perfect asdfjkld;
I kid, I kid.

As you said, nothing is perfect, and while this is quite lovely I would by no means call it perfect. Although I can't quite come up with anything in particular to point out...

Perhaps there could be more contrast closer to the viewer, as in the foreground blades of grass and such. I do believe they would pop out more, as they are closest, because right now the contrast seems relatively evenly distributed throughout. Also, as ~WarriorOwlflight said, the river (or creek or stream or whathaveyou) needs something more. Just the water closest to the viewer, once again. Some more shading to show the depth of the water maybe?

The caustics of the water overall appear pretty natural, and the dappled lighting looks pretty normal as well. I think the pink flowers and the leaves surrounding them turned out the best, honestly; maybe that's a good thing, but it could also be a little bad. There is no clear focus to the scene, and the fact that my eyes are drawn to the flowers near the edge is probably not good. This is just scenery though, so maybe you don't need a focus. I don't know. Whatever you were aiming to do, I suppose.

This would make for a very nice frame for something. Wouldn't detract from the main subject and would surround it nicely. Maybe for something like a dragon. Or a unicorn. haha.
I get that "mythical" vibe from this scene.
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AeroHybrid Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2014
Amazing!!! It's like heaven :D
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XGracelyx Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2013
i wish i could do that... some day... some day... (0.0)
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wonsowaty Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2013
Nice :) look on [link] for more great garden stuff :)
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CatOfTheWilderness Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Can I use on a place called CatsPawIsland?
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wonsowaty Featured By Owner May 9, 2013
Great painting :) look on [link] if you want find more awesome garden stuff
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Cookiewing Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I love this place. That means, if Eopeii wouldn't want to kill everyone who enters...
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SkimKimchi Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
nice :)
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Gay-Kid Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Steve is pretty
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Blairaptor Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2012  Student Digital Artist
This is fantastic. I can totally see you being a concept artist one day.
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WarmScarft Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2012  Student General Artist
Shadows are great, but theres one problem.

All those things looks like putted in one place. You haven't shown space. Well next time make sure that when you draw things , who are closer to the viewer, will have more details then the one whos further. The further needs to be more fainted then the one whose closer.

i hope you understand, cuz my english is not good.
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